Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Habit45, Feb 25, 2006.

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  1. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Things are so clear
    When I feel free
    the words and mood just happen for me
    a simple daily pleasure
    Promised to me

    Touched by the glow
    of every man woman and child
    I see who I am
    I can work toward anything
    if Im promised that feeling

    I could be anyone
    but that doesnt matter
    I just want to be a part of you
    Like you have been for me
    I'm sorry I failed
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    U2 are very gifted in your words...thanks for sharing...big hugs, Jackie
  3. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    WOW! another great poem from you...

    I am so amazed at your talent...

    Love BP
  4. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Thanks for your kind words Sadeyes and BP.

  5. i like your poem hun :hug:


  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Brilliant poem :smile:
  7. johnson8681

    johnson8681 Well-Known Member

    Great poem :wow:
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