Sour love

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by xan, Nov 9, 2006.

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  1. xan

    xan Chat Buddy

    Last time I'll write about her at least for now i think....



    No ammount of words can say how i feel about you,
    Once meant so more to me than anything, brought me joy,
    Seeing it written on soft red card,
    Your golden penmanship that you thought i'd forgotten.

    Now those words mean so much more, are so much more,
    They're the daggers through my heart,
    The torments of my dreams,
    All the love i had has turned so sour,
    I hate you so god damn much,
    And I hate myself for loving you.

    So I'll return your card and the word ditto will do,
    I can't describe how i feel for you,
    How I bleed for you, hurt for you, cry for you.
    So i cut it out, the pain i once felt,
    I'll live a zombie, no emotions to hold me back,
    An empty shell of a being...
     
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  2. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    great poem :)
     
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