Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BeautifullyChaotic, Sep 30, 2011.

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  1. BeautifullyChaotic

    BeautifullyChaotic Well-Known Member

    Okay, kinda dark, but I know I'm not alone here in this dark place...

    Crawl closer, forsaken. Into the blackness.
    Open eyes in the moonlight watch you standing in a window of despair.

    Listen! Listen closely! Listen for something real.
    Hope... it's fading away. No, it's shattered!

    You're getting restelss now, you'll never pick up the messy pieces.
    I am your poison, I can take it all away.

    Get away, receive midnight, inhale the darkness as it consumes you.
    Get away from the sun and bright lights.
    Get away from family and the closeness of friends.
    Shield yourself from this world and it's pains and tribulations.

    Now you're wasted, twisting, yet tired and stationary.
    I have you.
    Everything and nothing will make since when I am done with you.

    Young angel, surrender... I've got you up against the wall and I will devour you.

    As you begin to drown in an ocean of despair I will whisper to you thoughts and notions of sadness, pain and suffering.

    Welcome to my world, let me tell you who you are;

    You are a fool and no one wants you.
    You are an ugly bore.
    You are worthless, useless, simply taking up space.
    You would be better off dead.

    Through your death... I release you.
  2. Lana

    Lana Well-Known Member

    It is dark, but I like the way you wrote it.
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