Spiritual Trench

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ub3, Jul 19, 2013.

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  1. ub3

    ub3 Banned Member

    SPIRITUAL TRENCH ....created for David

    Im trying to get you out of this spiritual trench...but im feeling your pain and empathised with where you are AT…

    whitch resonated with me and has lead



    Giving a fuck about you
    …and your life
    … and your PAIN…

    i respected your honesty and courage which spoke to me volumes
    …4 less is more…
    NAME the problem…
    more is less ...silence is Golden
    …In the deepest despair we struggle
    even when things seem doomed and infected…
    You still never Never give up the fight
    when you cant find no peace in sight…
    no matter which way you turn...
    Keep on keeping on…Keep the fire burning strong
    when you want to forget everything that ever happened to you
    when your living in sin
    yet the past still haunts you2 much
    feel so alone and lost ...in my own skin
    Broken soulJah lost from Home
    frightened like a ghost forgoten blessedness
    ...we all do things we regret
    wearing your heart on your sleeve
    Lost your mind
    …fret like a lamb to the Slaughter
    ...Haters never want you to leave them behind...
    Sucking the force of your life
    this is not ok
    Mankind's ruin
    left you seeking comfort in despair...
    Helplessness crippled
    totally blank empty stares
    seeing only darkness here…hope is where?
    going through something and you just cant get over it....
    Not even near
    cant get it out your mind at all
    suffering this biblical fear…



    So STUCK…its too much...

    Trust in the lord with all your heart and get up...
    ....lean not on your own understanding for god is pure Love is pain…
    and he will direct your path…again

    I heard that (trust in the lord ) verse somewhere recently and thought of you and me and what we seem to have to go through in this life …and in a big way this is my poem 4 you. ..
    for it was written with you in mind…One love ....with you in spirit...Gabriel
  2. Daphna

    Daphna Well-Known Member

    I like this poem. Thanks for sharing! Are you Rastafarian??
  3. ub3

    ub3 Banned Member

    Thankyou for taking the time to read my poem...No im not rastafari but i follow some of their teachings
  4. HarleyTwin

    HarleyTwin Staff Alumni

    And this is where it gets tricky - as I think I've already told you - it resonates with me loudly. But I can't explain why I love it so. I could, but it would take away the fact that this is *your* poem. And I think that's something all us poets/writers have a struggle with - trying to see in the view of the artist's eyes and not our own but it's our habit. :)

    Still, I definitely see where you are coming from through these words. It is something along the lines of stuff that I have been mulling over in my own head lately. A marvellous job you've done. Thank you, for capturing a vision.
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