Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ACRon, Oct 29, 2006.

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  1. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    lets do this
    what feels so right
    working for the system
    your trust has been bought
    it feels like such a good idea
    but then the voices call you
    you look back
    no arguement is valid no more
    your someone else when the lights go out
    the words you said
    torn down by your humanity
    drawn toward electro impulses
    trying to break free
    who to trust
    one seems so logical and simple
    the other seems human
    who you are
    but who will love you now
    without forgetting your mistakes
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Nice one, Babyface!:smile: I like it.

  3. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    I just right down random moments in poems. kinda like taking a picture. I don't see the need to make a movie
  4. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    Very good! :biggrin:
  5. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    i've wrote better:smile:

    modesty is the key!:biggrin:
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