Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Will, Nov 20, 2006.

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  1. Will

    Will Staff Alumni

    I'm feeling a little lonely, missing someone right now. I had to write it, I've never written poetry. I'll warn you and say I don't rhyme well and I don't have the biggest vocabulary...


    A lonely girl, out in the cold,
    A rare sight, a story never to be told,
    All she wanted was one thing,
    A person who understands,
    Who feels the sting?

    A heart like hers,
    Clean and pure,
    Is too alone,
    To life’s pain endure

    How long does it take?
    Through masks, so fake,
    To see the real you,
    The blood and the bruise

    Through all the lies,
    What I see, in your teary eyes,
    Is a person in pain,
    Trying to find a way, to be same

    In our wasteland,
    People can’t understand,
    Life is above,
    Death is below,
    My love for you,
    Can’t been shown.

    I wish I was there,
    So me and you,
    Don’t live the nightmare,
    Of being alone,
    Over the phone

    A little help, to a heart,
    Torn to shreds, and ripped apart,
    Would you cry?
    For me and for you,
    You can’t die,
    You’d take me too

    I can’t see you,
    But your picture’s so clear,
    I can’t hear you,
    Yet your voice is so pure,
    I can’t feel you,
    A long pain I endure,
    I can’t love you,
    Because I’m never near.

    Fall into my arms,
    Cry out the fear,
    Till the sun is up,
    And the time is near,
    Our hearts will part,
    Our hands will fall,
    For the sake of your heart,
    Let me be there

    Don’t go yet,
    Don’t wave me away,
    Since we’ve met,
    I want you to stay,
    Don’t leave me,
    I need you too,

    Just to breathe,
    Just me and you


    Thanks for reading...
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I couldn't have read it if you hadn't shared it!:smile: Thank you for sharing your feelings with us - they describe a lot of people's feelings, your words. Keep writing.


  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    beautiful poem!!
  4. Remedy

    Remedy Chat & Forum Buddy

    Great poem, I enjoyed it. :hug:
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