Stole

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by feathers, Mar 31, 2011.

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  1. feathers

    feathers Well-Known Member

    Bitter feelings,
    Twisting, piercing,
    Devastates her soul

    Bitter hatred,
    Burning, blazing,
    Loathing takes its toll

    Her lonely heart,
    Aching, begging,
    Love left an aching hole

    A cold sharp blade,
    Slicing, wounding,
    Her life, her chances, stole.




    First time poster. Go easy on me (;
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    That was very well written hugs i like it
     
  3. feathers

    feathers Well-Known Member

    Thanks Eclipse :D
     
  4. ThornThatNeverHeals

    ThornThatNeverHeals Well-Known Member

    i like it much, its got character.
     
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