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Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by amicrazy, Jul 29, 2008.

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  1. amicrazy

    amicrazy Well-Known Member

    you gotta quit

    don't even like this shit
    you damn sick of it
    this shit'll make you sick

    you gotta quit

    and stop wasting time
    fucking up your mind
    as you pretend you're fine

    you gotta quit

    you've gotta walk away
    you gotta learn to say
    none for me today

    you gotta quit

    before time runs out
    cause without a doubt,
    you're going down that route

    you gotta quit

    don't even like this shit
    you damn sick of it
    this shit'll make you sick

    you gotta quit

    not another hit
    not a little bit
    you're not doing it

    you gotta quit
     
  2. amicrazy

    amicrazy Well-Known Member

    new title: You Gotta Quit

    seems more appropriate
     
  3. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    that's creative. very song-like, even.

    :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Good poem hun :arms: Thank you for sharing!
     
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