Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by deb22, Jan 1, 2015.

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  1. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    Alone in the darkness, light fading fast
    my heart growing colder with each days repass
    the warmth of the world is but dark shadows now
    the deep pain in my soul whispers quietly..... but how?

    A light in the distance shines bright in my mind
    my breathing is halted, no way to unwind
    to hold you again, my arms open wide
    the tears flowing slowly, releasing the tide

    This world was once a joy to behold
    the blackness of loss, has left me so cold
    the light in your eyes kept life in my heart
    my body has crumbled each day were apart

    My pain has subsided, my emotions are stayed
    clasping tight to the pillow where once you had laid
    the warmth of the world is but dark shadows now
    I will join you one day, this is my vow.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Your poem is so well written emotions of loss and sadness i am sorry for your pain I do hope you find some support to help you with your grief hugs
  3. deb22

    deb22 Well-Known Member

    Thanks total eclipse, It has been only a month and a half and I am trying hard to stay here but some days it's just too much. This will be my first year since I was 19 years old without her[ I am 52 now] This site has been a true support for me, I come here daily and just read post and replies which helps a lot. Hug back to ya!
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