Substrata

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BelovedDreamer, Aug 7, 2007.

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  1. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    I drove past your house today
    didn’t see your car
    tried not to think it
    but I wondered where you are.
    I don’t know what I’d hoped
    but today had proved a day
    for lost things being found.
    A misplaced case and contents
    beneath the passenger seat
    A DVD “found” safely in its proper place
    where it had been all along
    if only I had thought to look.
    Perhaps
    as I cruised by in my
    environmentally conscious vehicle
    I hoped something similar would prove true.
    That somehow
    seeing your hair a little bit grayer
    as you tilt your head to enter a parked car
    or move solemnly towards the mailbox
    everything would suddenly make sense
    the pieces falling into place
    with a slide-swoosh and a metallic clink.
     
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Absolutely astounding, once again. :clap:
     
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