Suicidal Child **Might trigger

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by expressive_child, Oct 9, 2007.

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  1. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    I am just a child, so lost and on my own..
    In the mist, in the shadows, I drift alone..
    In the midst of nowhere on a darkest night,
    I am but a flickering flame, dying in sight..
    This life is like a journey through the fire,
    no chance for compassion, nor fond desires..

    Craving for a caring hand that understands..
    My soul yearns for death - an eternal end..
    I'll smile, I'll feel alive, only in dreams..
    In life, I'm tormented by sanity's scream..
    I shall find solace, upon the distant stars,
    but no angel can heal these immortal scars..
     
  2. Blackness

    Blackness Guest

    argh I love this one, almost made me cry :(
    "Craving for a caring hand that understands.."
    we all need that so bad!

    best poem
     
  3. mb75

    mb75 Well-Known Member

    You have some beautiful poems....
    I'm sure a lot of us can identify with them , it's like discribing what we feel inside.
     
  4. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Thank you Danni.. :hug:

    Thank you Blackness.. :hug:

    I guess the poems I write are mostly about the way I am feeling...
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    love it :)
     
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