Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lestat, Jan 2, 2008.

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  1. Lestat

    Lestat Well-Known Member

    You know you don’t want too, But you know that you must
    You just want to start new, you don’t have anyone to trust,
    Your looking through a tunnel, its all nice over there,
    You think of the peace it offers, and all the people that don’t care,
    Everything’s in slow motion, its so surreal down here,
    You want everyone to know how much you love them, but will they even care?
    I don’t want to hurt anyone, I just want it all to go away,
    Its always the same answer, it will be alright oneday,
    That day never comes, its all the way over there,
    No one will help me, all they do is just stare,
    I don’t want this anymore, I just want my life given back,
    I did nothing wrong, but it all turned to black,

    help me someone please, why wont you hold me?
    Why do you lie? Why do you run? Why do you not see?
    You did it all today, when you turned away from me,
  2. xXWhateverItTakesXx

    xXWhateverItTakesXx Forum Buddy

    That's beautiful :hug:
  3. Lestat

    Lestat Well-Known Member

    Thanks. i think i need to re-edit it a bit, i wrote it very quickly
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Beautiful poem :hug: I'm sure they would care. :yes:
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