suicider

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, Jun 20, 2008.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    tonight I sit in
    drinking cider
    as all life drains
    deep inside her

    there is a demon in my head
    promoting stories of the dead


    as if I ever needed
    a fucking reminder

    tonight I sit in
    drinking cider
    now tomorrow
    is far behind her

    there are spirits in my head
    anchoring this body like lead


    surely swift simple
    death would be kinder?
     
  2. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    I'm not glad you are chained down

    But I am glad you are back so I can read your writing
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
  4. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Ali you have a wonderful way of nailing a feeling

    there is a demon in my head
    promoting stories of the dead

    knew that feeling oh so well!!

    :hug:

    psst: come join the AA thread on monday
     
  5. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Glad you're sharing your wonderful poems with us again!:smile:


    :hug:
     
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