Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Julia-C, Mar 2, 2011.

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  1. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    In his eyes, she found trust,
    from his lips , found timeless heat.
    He comforted, trembling hands,
    with a smile, and honest patients.

    She wore his heart, as a sweater,
    sheltered from self doubt, by his caress.
    Endearing whispers, rolled off his tongue,
    Like a melody, that reached her soul.

    Her tears, are not of sorrow,
    deep breaths, are derived of rapture.
    Pressure builds, levee gives way,
    her senses, go supernova.
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Well written ilike reading your poetry hugs
  3. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I have been here and know what it is like to have someone's love fill my heart like this...thank you for reminding me...J
  4. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I like it!
    "She wore his heart, as a sweater," <-- brilliant line :)
  5. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thanks guys, I appreciate your kind comment. :smile:
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Great poem! :heart:
  7. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    Thank you I.M.O.Y.

    Poetry in motion
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