Surreal

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  1. Surreal
    is the tangible
    you cannot feel,
    where sight is blind
    for too much to see
    This truth
    a false reality,
    appearance a mirage
    blurred edge of this horizon
    mind not grasping
    comprehending
    confusion never-ending
    Surely this is all a dream
    but no,
    it will not leave
    and there’s nothing to believe
    but you are trapped
    in this, illusion
    mocking sanity
    antithesis of lucidity
    with no other witness in this haze
    but delirium, in endless days
    full overflowing for one mind to take,
    all too unkind for a mind to make sense
    of Too Much…


    FAL1 (in "the zone")
     
    Last edited: Jun 11, 2006
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Hi FAL1..."antithesis of lucidity" what a perfect line and what a poignant poem,,thanks for sharing...big hugs, Jackie
     
  3. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member


    Yes! my mind feels like oil and water.
    "endless days" also true
    beautiful
     
  4. resistance

    resistance Staff Alumni

    I love it when poems include some words I don't understand, it makes them even more appealing. I like it! (and yes, I did understand it! :) )
     
  5. Thanks Y'all.

    "Yes! my mind feels like oil and water."
    Ohhhhhh, that is SO perfect - just precisely what it feels like...

    FAL1
     
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow..

    got me thinking... that is for sure...

    BP
     
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Always, always, so perfectly descriptive and lovely to read aloud.:smile: What a gift you have, just wish you didn't have to feel this way to express such sadness and emptiness...:sad:

    love,

    least
     
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