Sweet demise

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Corax, Oct 27, 2009.

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  1. Corax

    Corax Active Member

    I wrote this in February of 2006


    Black or white
    constant fight

    my light side and my dark battle so

    Black and red
    How I've bled

    Soon I'll learn all the truths they don't know

    Black on black
    out of track
    So tired of the truth and the lies

    White or red
    flesh or bread
    answers lay in my own sweet demise​
     
  2. Aurora Gory Alice

    Aurora Gory Alice Well-Known Member

    Wow, I really really liked that. I can see that making a great song in fact. I could kinda hear the melody in my head when I read it.
     
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