Sweet Jane

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Infinite Sadness, Jul 10, 2010.

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  1. Infinite Sadness

    Infinite Sadness Well-Known Member

    Hey Jane
    How was the weather today?
    From the colour of your eyes,
    I'm guessin' it was a hurricane.

    Plain Jane
    What did you have for dinner tonight?
    You're all skin and bones,
    it's quite the frightful sight.

    Little Jane
    Do you remember playing that day?
    He said it would be fun,
    but games aren't supposed to cause pain.

    Oh Jane Doe
    There was so much sorrow.
    A shame for this world,
    that you will know no tomorrow.
     
  2. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    Awww cute poem!!! :tongue::mhmm:
     
  3. Infinite Sadness

    Infinite Sadness Well-Known Member

    lol thanks ;)

    You know..things you write in hospital and all.. heh
     
  4. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    Totally! i spent all my times writing. Like things i was going to say to my ex after i get out. :eek:hmy:
     
  5. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    I really like this one :hug:
     
  6. Infinite Sadness

    Infinite Sadness Well-Known Member

    Thank you very much.
    I am glad you liked it.. :)
     
  7. mixedemotions

    mixedemotions Forum Buddy

    I like this. Its really good
     
  8. Infinite Sadness

    Infinite Sadness Well-Known Member

    Thank you mixedemotions :hug:
     
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