Sweet Savannah Nights

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by InnerStrength, Aug 2, 2007.

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  1. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    “Sweet Savannah Nights”

    I lick those
    Sweet Savannah Nights
    in my dreams

    Relishing the clear sight
    And seemingly endless calm
    Of days washed away

    They are now only mirages
    Desert ghosts bleeding into eternity
    An eternity of dreaming
    Knowing I’ll never truly experience
    Those sweet savannah nights ​
  2. pisces-music-girl

    pisces-music-girl Well-Known Member

    I really liked it. I'm very partial to the last stanza, where you'll never experiance it, because it belongs to your dreams.

    I love it. Write more! :smile:
  3. expressive_child

    expressive_child Well-Known Member

    Short and sweet! :biggrin:
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