**Swept away over a thousand seas**

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Marshmallow, Dec 10, 2006.

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  1. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    Well im not much of a poet but recently just randomly started writing things down... heres what i just got :unsure:

    Swept away over a thousand sea's

    My heart
    Cracked at the seems
    Barely visible cracks
    But they exist
    Everyday those cracks grow
    Just like my love for you
    Love but hurting at the same time
    Each moment my heart grows weaker
    My heart begins to disintegrate
    I stand at the edge of the sea
    Those tiny pieces of me fall down
    Float away with no care in the world
    Swept away over a thousand sea's
    Gentle caressing the sea until they reach you
    They survive their massive journey to your hands
    You scope them up into your palms
    Hold it to your chest
    Transforms into a magical feeling
    You can finally feel what I feel you
    The love I feel for you
    And the hurt I feel at the same time
    But I will always go thru that pain for you
  2. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    It was a great poem...

    i loved the emotions there is in the poem... and how it has a great sense of what i am feeling right now...

    Love BP
  3. emma-louise

    emma-louise Guest

    -hugs- That's really good honey, a little sad but really good.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Beautiful <3
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