System Overload (in the fog...)

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  1. System overload
    I’m inside the fog
    Mental lapse, break
    This is what I make of
    pause and rest,
    exhaustion at its best
    Nothing is real
    but this moment
    Can’t see back
    Cannot see past it
    It’s taken hell
    to get to this refuge;
    This place of
    nothing left to lose
    Blown into the wind,
    like feather, like leaf ~
    where there is no
    other relief, well,
    let it carry me then
    till I come back to reality
    once again…

    Yet as God is my witness,
    I beg with insistence,
    “Let me remain here!”

  2. curtius

    curtius Well-Known Member

    you left me out of breath...

  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni


    Excellent and insightful, as always!:smile: You go, girl!:wink:

  4. Thank you my friends...*sigh*

    (It's terrifying where the mind can go when overburdened.)

  5. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    Isn't ironic that when we are at our sadest state, we are usually most profound...thanks for affirming how i have felt at these times...and PS, i miss you...big hugs, Jackie
  6. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wonderfully written...

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