Take Me Outta My Head(A Love Song) Warning possibly triggering

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  1. Morningstar

    Morningstar Well-Known Member

    (Warning possibly triggering imagery)

    Well I wrote this song lyric today while I was at my noon NA meeting and I really like how it turned out. I tend to write stuff that's outside of social 'norms' and is otherwise looked at badly. I just wish I had the time to really learn how to make music it'd be nice to bring the stuff I write to actual life so to speak(but i don't). Anyway I'd really like it if people would tell me what they think about it. And please don't leave me comments about stuff like "that's not love" or "that's gross' etc. I've heard it all in regards to this subject matter and don't really wanna hear it again. It's all my life, my views, my inclinations, and most of all it's MY ART, not yours, don't like it, gosh hit the back button. Otherwise like I said I really would like to hear peoples comments.


    "Take Me Outta My Head(A Love Song)"

    The cold steel of these chains
    In such subtle contrast
    To this warmth an sharp bite
    Of this black rope so tight
    Binding an cutting into. . .my wrists
    Break my skin an I bleed
    Take me outta my head (take me outta my head)

    Receiving all this pain(pleasure)
    Let it take me away(higher)
    Yes give me all I need(pain)
    Give me all I want(more)

    The crack of a sharp whip
    Such a sensual, arousing sound
    Left a deep beautiful gash
    Pain an hot blood. . .such a turn on
    Soft silk wrapped so very tight
    Around my yearning throat(choking)
    Oh take me outta my head

    Receiving all this pain(pleasure)
    Let it take me away(higher)
    Yes give me all I need(pain)
    Give me all I want(more)

    Oh, will you hurt me?
    And dig deeper in
    (be my disease)
    Please make me bleed
    Oh, please let me feel
    (The sweetest pain)
    Give me your anger, your rage
    Take it out on me
    (I can take it all)
    Beat me, tear me apart
    Spit on and degrade me
    (Leave me broken, bleeding)
    I shiver in pleasure, in ecstasy
    Taking me outta my head
    (Turning me on, so hard)

    Receiving all this pain(pleasure)
    Let it take me away(higher)
    Yes give me all I need(pain)
    Give me all I want(more)

    Receiving all this pain(pleasure)
    Let it take me away(higher)
    Yes give me all I need(pain)
    Give me all I want(more)

    More. . .more. . .more
     
  2. Void_reality

    Void_reality Member

    very creative. I could imagine it being sung similarly to a song called "Love to hate, Hate to me"
     
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