Take Me

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MoAnamCara, Jun 28, 2012.

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  1. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    Take Me

    When night falls

    And shadows appear

    Are you there, hiding?

    When I banish myself

    To my own cocoon

    Do you sit with me, silently?

    When my tears fall

    And I can't stop them

    Can you feel my pain, unending?

    When my phone rings

    And I hope it is you

    Do you see my disappointment, daily?

    When I read your letters

    And that familiar ache develops

    Do you know how I love you, truly?

    When a memory appears

    And I re-live an event

    Are you on that road with me, walking?

    When my soul cries out in desperation

    For you and yours

    Will you take me please, quickly
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    I am so glad you are with us...although this poem is so talented, it makes me so sad to know you feel this way...wish I could do more...hope these hugs from Brooklyn are felt with the caring they are intended
  3. IV2010

    IV2010 Well-Known Member

    beautiful poem Mo..straight from the heart. :console:
  4. 41021

    41021 Banned Member

    Wow MO. That is amazing.

    Something I can totally relate too, which in turn saddens me that you too feel this way. (((((gentle hugs)))))
  5. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    Thank you all :grouphug:
  6. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    so beautifully expressed. :hug: The love doesn't disappear. You will always know that your loved one loved you. *nods*
  7. MoAnamCara

    MoAnamCara SF Artist

    The Answer

    The scent of the ocean:

    The sound of the waves:

    The feel of the water:

    To keep walking,
    And deeper:
  8. 41021

    41021 Banned Member

    a temptation. Would love to be at the ocean right now. was actually supposed to be. She has a way of drawing one in, and in this head space, she would be enticing...deeper and deeper. but she is also a source of comfort and soothing.
    love to you Mo ((gentle hugs)) be safe I hope you can find safe comfort safe soothe be gentle with you
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