Taken...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by FoundAndLost1, Jan 15, 2007.

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  1. Starlight
    Magic
    Silence
    I miss you ~
    So much, I want to die,
    and have…
    I knew your presence
    I felt your essence;
    The fullness in your emptiness
    and space
    Perfection within ripe finesse
    of the fruition of the soul,
    showing me my true face
    Having been in darkness so long
    it made me recognize you then all along ~
    A darkness where my faith once grew
    Starlight
    Magic
    Silence
    I miss you;
    My mind too full
    these days and nights
    forgetting all your sacred ways
    and blessed flights
    away
    Terror fills me
    for I no longer see
    light, and dark,
    and how each has their part…
    There is now only one it seems
    There’s too much in the past
    to be laid to rest
    All too much
    that has taken
    my best

    FAL1

     
  2. shellz

    shellz Guest

    Wow, That was really good. You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!
     
  3. InnerStrength

    InnerStrength Well-Known Member

    Very well written...and true.
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    All your works are well-written and true, and reflect your feelings - and often ours as well - so accurately and beautifully... but I'd rather you didn't have the talent for writing and not have the feelings that inspire your writing... does that make any sense?

    love,

    least
     
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    wow... everytime i read your poems... it hits the spot...

    great work hun

    BP
     
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