Tattooed Upon My Dreams.

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Kunera, Mar 27, 2011.

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  1. Kunera

    Kunera Well-Known Member

    Etched into my mind, you can never escape.
    I'll blindly chase my dreams, until I catch you.
    Tattooed upon these dreams, the clay which you gave shape.
    At first a simple wish, alas with time they grew.

    With time they grew, those dreams of me and you.
    Each word you said to me, one by one they stuck.
    Forever fresh; crisp as morning dew.
    Each word forever there, am I cursed or is it luck?

    Tattooed upon my dreams, you cannot get away.
    The hunt begins! I chase; you run.
    The more I stay, the less you say.
    Is the chase or catch more fun?

    I blindly chase, yet give you space
    for the words I long to hear.
    After all, this is no race,
    I just want you, my dear.

    Etched into my mind, you can never escape.
    I blindly chase my dreams, one day I'll catch you.
    Tattooed upon these dreams, the clay which now has shape.
    I blindly follow you, these feelings tried and true.
     
  2. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    David, I really enjoyed reading this. Do you write songs? These verses could be great lyrics for a song. Thanks for posting!
     
  3. Kunera

    Kunera Well-Known Member

    Thanks! I'm actually glad you said that, since that was what I was going for! I've been jamming with a few friends here and there, and I was trying to get some lyrics together so we could start building a song.
     
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