Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Isa, Feb 26, 2006.

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  1. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Tears wont return you
    In deliverence to my arms
    And thoughts wont murmer to you
    That I miss you, come home

    Letters wont reach you now
    And bring you safely to the cradle
    No saintly cotton wool
    Could stop your fragile bones to break

    My tiny one
    My broken thoughtful one
    The silent one
    Sleep softly now and hush
    Hush and dont say a word

    Words wont return you
    Words are never heard
  2. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    How touching and how very sad...sorry you went through this if this is autobiograhical...big hugs, and i hope you are in better places...Jackie
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  3. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    I wrote it tonight, yeah it is about my sister Laura. But im not sad tonight, just thoughtful <3
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    From what I read in the heroine thread, and reading this poem, it is such a tragic loss...please PM me if you would like to share...I know what it is like to loose my best friend, and still have to live on...again, I am sorry you went/ are going through this...big hugs, Jackie
  5. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    that was a wonderful poem! I really liked it...

    Love BP
  6. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Thanks BP <3 I dont post all my poems because Id flood the forum lmao, but occasionally i post them.
  7. gothic_spleen

    gothic_spleen Antiquities Friend

    keep posting i like them
  8. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Your poems are so much more than when i first registered to this site. You really have taken your words in a much more powerfull direction. I really like this one.:smile:
  9. Isa

    Isa Well-Known Member

    Habit.. er?!


    you might be referring to when i posted about 7 very dark poems.

    bear in mind ive been writing poems since i was 9, progressing and changing etc.

    those 7 werent my style at the time, they were just associated to a thread i made (and linked to them all to help people understand)

    i havent really changed my style in the past two months.

    thanks xx
  10. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    Cool, must of been those seven then. I can only go on what I see but they that one was very moving. have you got your band up and running yet?:smile:
  11. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    wonderful poem :hug:
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