Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Driretlanii, Aug 19, 2007.

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  1. Driretlanii

    Driretlanii Active Member

    Tears of joy, tears of sadness:
    Tears that bring me to madness...
    Tears that I hold inside
    Even if these feelings I cannot hide...
    Will it be because of you
    That I feel so lost and blue?
    I'm drowning in my own tears,
    Being consumed by all my fears...
    Why can't I spread my wings and fly,
    Even though what I really want is to die?
    All because of this early shed tear...
    Just let me from this world disappear!
  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I love this poem. I am so sorry for my delay in responding to it. I think that this poem is powerful and deep and emotional. I hope that you share more of your poems with us. If you ever need to talk I am here just send me a pm. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome poem..i really liked it :)
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