Thank you (opinions needed...)

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by kindtosnails, Dec 20, 2006.

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  1. kindtosnails

    kindtosnails Staff Alumni

    Its more of a kind of letter that kinda rhymes...Question is, do I send it, or re-write it? :unsure:

    I forgot something when I wrote your christmas card.

    But how can I tell you?
    How can I say
    That its because of you I'm here today?

    You took my hand
    When no one would.
    You wouldn't leave,
    No matter
    How hard I pushed,
    You persisted,
    When I hurt you -
    Saying things I know are true,
    Yet aren't to you.

    I just wanted
    No, needed to say...

    Thank you

    I wouldn't see this christmas
    If it weren't for you.
  2. Terry

    Terry Antiquities Friend Staff Alumni

    Tis mighty fine as it is hun. :smile:
  3. kath

    kath Well-Known Member

    Send it.Its great.Straight from the heart.i love it!!!!!
  4. Sounds just PERFECT to me...

  5. ~CazzaAngel~

    ~CazzaAngel~ Staff Alumni

    It's great!!!!!!!! I love it..... thank you so much for sharing this, it's reached my heart hun. :hug: :clap: :1st:
  6. TLA

    TLA Antiquitie's Friend

    yes, agree with all of the above. Written from the gut. :wtg:
    Wish my thoughts were as clear cut.

    Be careful what kind of response you receive, you may not be prepared. We never are ready for what will happen. Emotions are funny that way.
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Yes, send it! That is beautiful and heartfelt!:smile: I'd be honored to receive it!:smile: :smile:


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