"That sound again"

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by passengers_side_, Oct 17, 2012.

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  1. passengers_side_

    passengers_side_ New Member

    The mildew
    morning opens,
    it's presence known
    Still blue

    Wind cuts memories,
    cascade's your shadow
    A name on the fog
    the past below us

    Rose hued through the glass
    Melancholy waves
    the stage moves
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Beautiful poem hun
  3. Acy

    Acy Mama Bear - TLC, Common Sense Staff Member Safety & Support

    Your poem evokes a sense of stillness and then a sense of the "unsettling" of that stillness by wind, cascades, memories, apparitions, and melancholy. Very nice!
  4. Sadeyes

    Sadeyes Staff Alumni

    This is perfect
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