That's Me...

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by absolution, Mar 26, 2011.

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  1. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    Sorry guys, not much of a poet but this is something I wrote when I came close to ending the pain that my friends have left behind...

    Could you feel that stretch of light
    Reaching for your hand?
    That was me...

    Could you see that glimpse of hope
    Just beyond the the pain?
    That was me...

    Did you notice the hand reaching out
    As you walked the other way?
    That was me...

    Did you see the girl on the floor clasping her heart
    Hoping it wouldn't burst right out of her chest?
    The same girl that now stands on the edge
    Knowing she can't bare the pain you left behind?
    That's me...
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I can relate to the intense sadness you show i am sorry you too have to suffer the aftermath of someone leaving YOur poem says so much hugs
     
  3. absolution

    absolution Forum Buddy

    :hug: thanks hun.
     
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