The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Value

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by the fleet asleep, May 12, 2009.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. the fleet asleep

    the fleet asleep Well-Known Member

    I can see the shadows crawl
    on the wall
    their source is slender
    and tall
    i play with a ball

    my heart resembles a young asian boy
    who carries the water on his shoulders
    and maintains the well

    he tells people not to throw their garbage in there
    but they do
    and the water tastes like garbage now

    also, the well is next to a landfill

    my soul is like a cloud in the dark
    though, sometimes you can see clouds at night
    but they get in the way of the stars
    the stars are my happiness, by the way

    my existence is like a spider in a tree
    but considering this tree is next to disney world
    the people passing by are too caught up in such rides
    as splash mountain, and tower of terror
    to notice the beautiful web it spins

    sometimes i stare into the darkness
    and wonder why the light runs bare
    i need someone to find
    the lightswitch to my soul

    or at least give me a candle so i can read twilight
     
  2. The_Discarded

    The_Discarded Staff Alumni

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    gj hun! thats deep!
     
  3. Spearmint

    Spearmint Well-Known Member

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    Nice work! :hug:
     
  4. GabrielConroy

    GabrielConroy Well-Known Member

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    alan can i have your babies
     
  5. Bubble

    Bubble Well-Known Member

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    Alan, want an aloe vera tissue to go with that candle so you can read twilight?

    *HUGS* well written and jam-packed with emotion.
     
  6. wheresmysheep

    wheresmysheep Staff Alumni

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    *more generic praise* :tongue:
     
  7. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Re: The Abyss That Is My Worthless Soul. Also, My Heart Is Of Very Little Monetary Va

    Great work alan :arms:
     
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.