The Act

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by confuzzle, Jul 8, 2009.

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  1. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    The worlds a stage
    Shakespeare used to say
    In my sorrow and rage
    happiness, fear, and iron clad cage
    I get the feeling
    that cause so many people reeling
    that we all are forfeit
    I know what you'll say, shut up and cork it
    I fuck up
    You suck up
    we all have our parts to play
    Supporting, conforming, all trying to delay
    Death, the end, the eternal darkness
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  2. yursomedicated

    yursomedicated Chat & Forum Buddy

    That's really good. Did you write that?

  3. confuzzle

    confuzzle Well-Known Member

    It's all original work.
    My Process
    1. My thoughts
    2. Come to SF
    3. Go to Poetry section when I want to write.
    4. I compose, right there and then.

    Little to no edits to my poems, I just write down what's inside. Don't know how good it is, as I haven't seem to find my style. Maybe I am still trying to find my voice, but I just let it out.

    so yeah, that's original.

    And if you were joking, it wasn't until i wrote this that i considered that possibility. Still, I wanted to reply. :biggrin:
  4. Confusticated

    Confusticated Well-Known Member

    Dude this is really good.
    Nice work, and keep it coming.
    I wanna
  5. Bambi

    Bambi Well-Known Member

    I think it is really good too! I really like poetry,especially when I am sad. Gibran once wrote that the "ears long to hear what the heart knows in silence" so for me hearing/reading the words that encapsulate my feelings is a comfort in a way.
    You have a great style confuzzle and you are finding your voice... the voice of your heart and your mind. I look forward to your next work and thank you for sharing are sharing you heart with us.
    Love ya B
  6. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Fab poem :D
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