The Atheist's Kaddish

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by BelovedDreamer, Oct 9, 2011.

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  1. BelovedDreamer

    BelovedDreamer Well-Known Member

    I just pray that the world
    can take me back
    when all is over.
    I pray enough of me is left to be taken back
    when all is over.
    I dream that I’ll learn to forgive myself.
    I dream that a finish line is coming closer.
    I dream both light and dark.
    I pray that there are friends behind
    when all is over.
    I pray that I’m not too far behind
    when all is over.
    I dream that I’m being chased by time.
    I dream that the final moment mine is closure.
    I dream a scape, a pyre
    My mind
    It burns with fire.
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Again i love your writing hun hugs
     
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