The Ballad of Zoren

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  1. Just a short little poem I wrote for class years ago about a character I've had in my head for quite awhile now.


    There was once a hooded maiden
    Who had trodden many paths,
    Masking her figure with dark, black cloaks,
    Hiding her face with a sash.

    From northern country she once did hail
    Though her home it is no more,
    Now her fate lies with the roads,
    Escaping her past, full of scorn.

    Concealed within her weathered cloak
    Lies the truth behind her guise:
    Two thick, steel-gray swords
    Stand waiting at her side.

    The first of the blades, which damn her soul,
    Was given as a gift,
    By an “associate” of her murdered father,
    Whose death was bloody and swift.

    “Do I take the life that ended his?”,
    She pondered in the night
    And in the end, the guard was dead.
    Two wrongs did not make a right.

    The second of the deadly pair
    She had forged anew,
    In the smithy of her father,
    As he had taught her in her youth.

    With the weapon of her father,
    And the blade she smithed with skill,
    She vowed to hunt with fervor,
    Those responsible for the kill.

    Many seasons passed,
    And still she seeks her goal,
    Never resting, never tiring,
    Until their blood runs cold.

    And yet her heart of stone,
    Hardened by death and grief,
    Is not entirely damned to hell,
    There is hope, for even this thief.

    For if she learns to cast aside,
    The revenge that burns in her soul,
    Perhaps one day she can atone for her sins,
    And love, like she had once known.

    But until that day, should it come,
    She’ll continue to stalk the night,
    Searching, ever searching,
    For some way to make it all right.

    There was once a hooded maiden
    Who had trodden many paths,
    Masking her figure with dark, black cloaks,
    Hiding her face with a sash.
     
  2. NYJmpMaster

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    Thank you for sharing - it is captivating and well written- it is difficult to get story / plot interest in a poem yet you managed to do it.

    Well done
     
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