* The Beginning *Definite Trigger*

Discussion in 'Rape and Abuse' started by **BeautyIsThin**, Sep 3, 2006.

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  1. * Okay * I know this is a poem but I've put it in this bit on the advice of a moderator * There are three bits to this but I'm not posting the middle bit because it is not very nice * If anyone wants to see they can PM me and ask *

    Walking down the street
    No worries and no fears
    But little did she know
    That evil crouches near

    This evil, it follows her
    Planning what to do
    Waiting for its moment
    She hasn’t got a clue

    The light is fading slowly
    Day turning into night
    And all the time he’s watching
    His evil burning bright

    He stalked her and he watched her
    Almost all the way
    And then he grabbed her and he touched her
    Dragging her away

    Her mouth opened wide
    Frozen in a scream
    Never heard by anyone
    Never even seen​
  2. * So then it's supposed to be the middle bit, which is called "The Darkest Hour", and then this bit *

    The Aftermath

    She wakes up suddenly
    Her heart beating fast
    It felt so real
    How long will this last?

    These nightmares she has
    It’s just like he said
    “You’ll dream of me”
    “I’ll always be in your head”

    He took her dignity
    Took away her control
    She’ll never be perfect
    He tainted her soul

    She strives and she strives
    To really forget
    But she remembers it all
    In stone it is set

    His touch burned her leg
    His seed poisoned her inside
    When will this be over?
    She wishes she had died​
  3. silverflash

    silverflash Well-Known Member

    Wow! That is a fantastic portrayal of someone who has been raped. In a sense I'd love to read the middle part - and yet I don't need to as my own experience can fill that bit in.
    You have summed up how I feel so well in the last verse. Thank you
  4. * Thanks for reading them *
  5. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    well done :smile:
  6. *It's easy to write about what you've experienced*
  7. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    hun, i dont think im gonna attempt to sayi anything unless you wanna talk about it, last time i opened my mouth about this i upset you and i dont wanna do that again :hug:
  8. * I don't know what there is to say * It happened * That's it *
  9. Marshmallow

    Marshmallow Staff Alumni

    hun, i knew, i could pick it up from the first poem you write, but i didnt wanna say anything to upset you
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