The Black Storm

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by saint6, Aug 22, 2011.

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  1. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    For some reason, I just started to write a lot, a lot of different thoughts and feelings, and recently just started writing it into poetry. Never had experience with it or anything even though I tried it before, but now it feels... different, I like it.

    I wrote this one today actually, it's from a dream I had last night, it's very personal but I feel like sharing it.

    The Black Storm
    In another world
    in the clear of day
    knowing it's a fantasy
    step after step
    a quick resurrection
    "this is real"
    keep walking ahead
    towards the gates of hell
    misty blue sky
    a beuatiful sight
    clear ocean blue
    with nervous intent
    rejecting the light
    as sky is blackened
    the storm has arrived
    now hypnotised
    falling under trance
    from power and lust
    that's drawing me near
    the black abyss
    doors open wide
    stright into hell
    opening my eyes
    laying still
    the black storm
    deep inside.​
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Keep writing hun keep getting those words those emotion out in the open like this so well written hun hugs to yu
  3. Speedy

    Speedy Staff Alumni

    I love it! Keep writing! :hug:
  4. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    Thanks for the replies, it means a lot :).
  5. tinker22fly

    tinker22fly Member

    hi sorry to post this here, i have no idea how to work this website can someone please explain how i make my own post i really need to talk to someone who feels like me
  6. saint6

    saint6 Well-Known Member

    After you enter a specific section on the forums, there is a New Thread button towards the top left of the screen, click it and then you will be starting a new thread.
    There is also a chat room, you'll see it up towards the top right of the screen, just click it and then click Enter Chat Room.
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