The Bliss of Your Kiss

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Twinkle ☆ Twinkle, Sep 30, 2010.

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  1. Twinkle ☆ Twinkle

    Twinkle ☆ Twinkle Well-Known Member

    The Bliss of Your Kiss

    A touch from your lips,
    Upon mine is bliss.
    And my heart lightly skips
    With your kiss.

    I feel like I'll slowly slip and sink,
    Into an endless dream, a fantasy,
    When your soft lips, deep and pink
    Meet mine and I gasp in ecstasy.

    Your lips pressed against mine
    Soft and sweet, tasting of desire
    Make everything seem fine.
    And all I feel is my body on fire.

    Your lips so hot that it burns,
    Kiss me passionately with tender devotion.
    You are all my body yearns,
    And love for you is my only emotion.

  2. Domo

    Domo Well-Known Member

    Cute and kinda hot at the same time :laugh:

    I like it :)
  3. mulberrypie

    mulberrypie Well-Known Member

    awww , i love it
  4. boo

    boo Well-Known Member

    Nice poem!
  5. ameretat

    ameretat Active Member

    I like it.. Its cute yet kinda HOT!! :)
  6. A.SoNiC.boY

    A.SoNiC.boY Well-Known Member

    I like this! i like the idea and the way its written. well done! :)
  7. Eric_Morrison

    Eric_Morrison New Member

    Nice. It reminds me of "Crystal Ship" by The Doors...

    I'll put some of mine poetry here eventually... I usually write in portuguese, but I write some in english as well...

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