The Closed Door

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  1. Youlleatamuffinandlikeit

    Youlleatamuffinandlikeit Well-Known Member

    The Closed Door

    This is the last time I’ll put my pen to paper
    Pillage deep within me in your favour
    You are the twisted, deliberate consummate liar
    I am the heated vanguard, mountains higher

    Did you find my pearl an amusing toy?
    Enjoy eradicating true love of yet another boy?
    Scammed and star-fangled-struck
    You’ll do anything for a quick buck
    Thrown in with the rest of your wicked collection
    You’re heading for hell ‘cause you can’t change direction

    You leave me cold and bitter, cynical
    Alone but not adrift
    My anger: clinical
    I know in time you’ll feel it
    Pain has a way of coming around
    It’s cyclical

    Never will I stop exposing you
    Never can I cease loathing you
    Hatred cannot stop betrothing you
    Venom’s not enough scolding you

    For beneath that ‘dainty’ faux-handsome mask
    Lurk lies and darkness
    Beckoning the lowest kind of task
    How deeply I regret filling that mark
    Forever tainted
    You have soiled my heart

    And there never was one whose life reeked of so much hoax
    Tell me at night does it surround you in choke?
    For clearly evil has some kind of price
    When you can’t get hard and you’re covered in lice

    This is the last time I fall prey to your slander
    Of you, or him or any gander
    I find this ‘love’ is anything but
    From every angle, the inside cut

    And tell me will it all finally go your way?
    When I’m a star
    And dancing on your grave?

    ~ Muffin
  2. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    That is one of the best poems I have read on this forum. I enjoyed reading that so much. You have some true talent. :) Thanks for sharing.
  3. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Wow excellent write your words reveal your pain your anger i hope your heart heals hugs You need to keep writing okay it is a gift hugs
  4. NoMoneyToPlease

    NoMoneyToPlease Banned Member

    This is simply,in a word, brilliant.
  5. carley5

    carley5 Banned Member

    Muffin :love:
  6. me myself and i

    me myself and i Account Closed

    yes it is, loved it.
  7. Youlleatamuffinandlikeit

    Youlleatamuffinandlikeit Well-Known Member

    Wow, thank you all so much for your encouraging feedback. Your words all mean so much to me. Thank you for reading my work.

    The 'Closed Door' refers not only to this person, but my heart in general. I do not see how I will ever be able to trust again. Beware abusive men.

    Hell hath no fury like a Muffin scorned.
  8. Julia-C

    Julia-C Well-Known Member

    You are very welcome.
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