the coming of the storm

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by thedeafmusician, Jan 20, 2006.

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  1. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    The trees are swaying,
    But there is no wind.
    The animals are scared.
    They take cover inside trees,
    Waiting for the coming of the storm.
    The dogs bark loudly,
    Afraid of the storm.
    They hide in their kennels.
    Their tails are between their feet,
    They are waiting for the coming of the storm.
    The thunder rumbles in the distance
    Lightning flashes in the trees.
    I try to take cover, as the
    Rain pelts down onto my head.
    No more must we wait for the coming of the storm.

    Hmm... I don't really know why I wrote this, because as a rule I sux at poetry... but oh well...

  2. Darkness N Light

    Darkness N Light Staff Alumni

    I love the poem. I do not think that you suck at all. It is well written. Thank you for posting it. I hope that you write more and post them. Take care and I love you. :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss :hug: :cheekkiss

    With Love,
    Crystal :hug: :cheekkiss
  3. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    Thankyou Crystal. I do write loads of stuff... when I write something that I think is good enough, I sometimes will post it, but more likely its gonna be a story.
    Take care...
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome! :hug:
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