The Decision

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lentil Illness, May 31, 2008.

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  1. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    I decided never
    to smile at anything
    I did not find funny

    I never smiled again

    I decided never
    to love anyone who
    never loved me back

    I never loved again

    I decided never
    to talk about anything
    I knew little about

    I never spoke again

    And I decided
    To end it all

    I never breathed


    again
     
  2. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    For God's sake ignore this, I am drunk.
     
  3. Lead Savior

    Lead Savior Well-Known Member

    I liked it, booze-haze or none
     
  4. LENTIL!!!!!!

    OMG!!!!!

    You're BACK!!!!!!

    And STILL apologizing for the sheer genius within the guise of stupor...
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
  6. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Alison, my dear friend, you are still apologizing, as FAL1 said, for genius whether drunk or sober. In my humble opinion, you write better drunk than I've ever written sober. Please keep on breathing. I need you here. You are my friend. I want to keep our friendship alive.

    lots of love, least:hug:
     
  7. Lentil Illness

    Lentil Illness Well-Known Member

    Thanks all :smile:

    Not sure how often I will be around. I do not have much to say.

    (((hugs))) to you all.

    A x
     
  8. No one’s asking you or expecting you to keep to an itinerary… just – don’t refrain – your words always rawk…
     
  9. ~PinkElephants~

    ~PinkElephants~ Senior member

    Lentil
    Drunk or not that is a beautifully written piece. I love the structure of it and the meaning behind it. :hug: Good to see you around the forum.
     
  10. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    I love this.... I haven't been around to read poetry for ages here, but I'm glad I chose to come in here and look today... otherwise I would have missed this! Your words are powerful beyond belief, I always look forward to reading your work whenever I see you've posted something. :hug:

    TDM
     
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