the deepening black

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by amis, Feb 4, 2006.

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  1. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    i look into the abyss of unending darkness
    a bottomless pit of deepening black
    too close to the edge, i slip and fall
    and i sink into the quagmire

    i struggle to climb up to the light
    but i can not do it
    the blackness envelops me
    and i start to drown in its depths

    around me i hear screams
    of sexual abuses, emotional
    abuses and physical abuses
    and i realize it is my voice

    i try to cover my ears
    but my hands won't move
    the darkness closes in on me
    i can only hope that it is
    my time to die

    until then
    the the deepening black
    sings its siren song
    and i slip further into its

  2. Dead_Alive

    Dead_Alive Guest

    wow! That is good! I am impressed! I write too... your awesome!
  3. Habit45

    Habit45 Guest

    That was great, keep writing please.. I liked how you talked of the abuses, all bieng your voice. its nasty memories for me.
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    awesome poem :hug:
  5. amis

    amis Antiquitie's Friend

    Thanks all....
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