The dismantled

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by ACRon, Oct 7, 2006.

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  1. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    'layers'

    The cute kitten envy,
    mimics me and mocks
    smiling, playing
    when will it stop.

    her string balls forgotten
    as she's curling her locks,
    with Fingers all broken.
    chapping skin, in knots.

    blood red, pink,
    splinters of white
    now gushing as she's cutting,
    In shallow light.

    violet liquid drips
    down on pastey flesh,
    caressed & flexing, circling
    an empty vessel, undressed

    complete, and true
    from hell to andromeda
    I filled it for you
    with orange juice in Florida

    You wore that dress well
    Full of false pride
    As you spit it back it hurts
    this joyous occasion ends, you lied
     
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  2. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Burn the witch

    Killing mom
    & the words that stung
    after years of her probing
    coming undone

    Honey, was a rock
    I let go simply
    she's defiantly shocked
    the hand which she rocked, a by baby

    terrorist, satanist
    the anti-christ falls
    screaming, bleeding
    fists through the walls

    My aggression, your obsession
    Assume I am in hell
    I didn't come this far
    to kiss go tell

    So dear Mrs righteous
    I don't possess your soul
    your fashion is cowardice
    superior, I'm told

    Long live the king
    And all he doth hold
    he sacrifices nothing
    for the liars
    he scolds
     
  3. Re: Burn the witch

    we shall cleanse the earth with fire
     
  4. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Re: Burn the witch

    Very good and very interesting, Babyface! I like it a lot, even tho I'm not sure I understand some of it - but like it all the same.:smile:

    least
     
  5. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Re: Burn the witch

    Thanks, i think. Its just an alter ego thing I think. The over coming of attachment and promises to a soul in trouble. blah blah, I ain't that clever but it expresses my pain (or perceived pain) well imo.

    I like to write poetry with balls:wootrock:
     
  6. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Wired All Wrong

    All these characters,
    in the brain,
    one is for guiding,
    one feels pain.
    one is in hiding
    one is, erm, stained?:laugh:

    backward, and forward
    upwards and back down,
    natures D student,
    boy, what a frown.

    a product of self,
    take your choice and live with it.
    doomed to poor health,
    death, please deal with it.

    your mum is your dad,
    your dad is your mum,
    deny it once more,
    trouble will come.

    type o+
    a negative world view,
    here's one for the losers,
    I love you.

    I escape to my creator
    far in the west,
    only to discover
    its the same twisted mess.

    the brain has been breeding,
    opposites attract,
    I am the Heathen,
    that is a fact.

    well,
    itself into that.

    immaculate conception
    WTF??
    Why wasn't this mentioned somewhere?
    written in blood

    Id stay here and bitch,
    Playing endless songs.
    But I have an itch,
    Im wired all wrong.​
     
  7. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Re: Wired All Wrong

    Very interesting and really neat!:smile:

    least
     
  8. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Re: Wired All Wrong

    Its a complete mess, random swirls of words. it reads like shards of sonic glass
     
  9. Biggie

    Biggie Antiquitie's Friend

    Re: Wired All Wrong

    I thought it was brilliant :smile:
     
  10. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Re: Wired All Wrong

    thanks biggie. most responses I get are sarcastic so I appreciate that
     
  11. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Death File #1

    get out of my way

    "no pass"
    till I purge myself
    to one tribal cause
    becoming someone else

    everybody just saying
    get out of my way
    They need more room

    Tired of my own complaint
    Working endlessly
    to explain it away

    come here to die?
    want to philosophy?
    no-one admit
    they like others to cry
    scared to look inside
    forget their slave life
    its easier that way

    I want all creatures to die
    all except for me
    I want to see them suffer
    decompose
    I need more room
    I want to be alone

    Then I can be in peace
    with the mission complete
    maybe then I'll be happy
    silent and sweet
    just the way they want me
    wouldn't that be neat
    Over their dead body
    They finally got what they wanted

    seeing people
    Giving others pointless tasks
    just to share their truth
    covering their ass

    spreading a disease
    disguising it as therapy
    Just so we know
    the depth of human misery
     
  12. Re: Death File #1

    wow. deep. i really enjoyed it. ur good...very good...
     
  13. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Re: Death File #1

    Deep, indeed!:eek:hmy:

    I like it a lot!:smile:

    least
     
  14. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Im getting a vasectomy

    protect my balls
    but what for
    no child that is born
    would want my shit
    my caffiene ridden shit

    I don't want kids
    I don't have the gaul
    they'd be like me
    they'd be dead
    before their born

    poor little dude
    he's gonna get used
    he's gonna suffer
    because I suffered
    sorry lad

    I won't feed your mum
    I won't charm her
    she'll be miserable
    together were scum
    kids want proper parents

    what a bad husband I would be
    what a terrible father I am
    my selfish lust
    just to appear good
    screw it
    Im done
     
  15. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    one morning



    forgive me
    I have a dream
    behave in grace
    please hold back and consider
    you can flow like an angel
    when wings are granted


    I feel the sun rise
    each morning & I die
    flowing to sky
    I smile and smile and smile
    will you join me in heaven
    you'd need to drop your mission
    & cast aside all reason


    please let us listen
    for a while to the earth
    if you believe, I can breath
    just for a little while
    were alive

    As our dream turns to dust
    and all thats left is us
    please don't forget me
    don't forget love​

     
  16. Re: one morning

    Congratulations on writing a very beautiful poem.
     
  17. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Unwanted restraint

    fast and furiously I toil
    through a wild forest of thorns
    seeking truth in the objective
    these negative fingers worn

    cut, caught and blistered
    Im artificial, devoid
    wasting energy abundantly
    my gentle patience torn

    giving up once more
    I fall down hard and low
    awaiting my next zephyr
    for the black hole I know

    Why won't this rope
    cease and let me go
    I know I can avoid this
    without false hope of snow
     
  18. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    geek boy

    Geek boy
    sit pondering in this garden
    smiles contently watching fish in deepest ponds
    muddled efforts to understand
    years of karma gone wrong

    He laughs frolicks, churns his words
    finding one conciousness to subscribe his life
    yet each one separate, they are but the same
    A path to death, avoidance of sin
    peace on earth
     
  19. ACRon

    ACRon Well-Known Member

    Alone in unity

    So alone
    its not too cold
    I forget you today
    as the river flows away
    Im sinking into myself
    breathing new life to the stars
    they exist in all of us
    in this mission we share
    only tyrannious people
    care how we get there
    but war is natural
    and Im old and beaten
    another will do me wrong
    my purity, still strong
     
  20. live

    live Antiquitie's Friend

    Re: geek boy

    I'm liking these recent ones... thanks.
     
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