Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by propagandhi, Apr 23, 2006.
the dreams, the dreams
keeping me awake all night
no sleep, I scream
I like it.:smile: Do you do haiku? I love haiku. I figure if you can get a message or feeling across in seventeen syllables, you've said it clearly but succinctly.:wink:
I wish you deep peace in your sleep, truly I do.
I’ve just recently found my own, yet still struggling.
It’s a worthy struggle. Peace is worth it.
Have patience with your self…
its well written...
short and sweet!!!
Sometimes the best ones, that are simple and affective...