the dreams

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by propagandhi, Apr 23, 2006.

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  1. propagandhi

    propagandhi Antiquitie's Friend

    the dreams, the dreams
    keeping me awake all night
    no sleep, I scream
     
  2. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    I like it.:smile: Do you do haiku? I love haiku. I figure if you can get a message or feeling across in seventeen syllables, you've said it clearly but succinctly.:wink:

    More, please.

    Sooz
     
  3. I wish you deep peace in your sleep, truly I do.

    I’ve just recently found my own, yet still struggling.

    It’s a worthy struggle. Peace is worth it.

    Have patience with your self…

    ~ FoundAndLost1
     
  4. BrokenPieces

    BrokenPieces Well-Known Member

    its well written...

    short and sweet!!!

    Sometimes the best ones, that are simple and affective...

    BP
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    :hug:
     
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