The Drowning Of My Sorrows

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by diamond2, Apr 3, 2012.

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  1. diamond2

    diamond2 Active Member

    Bronze, silver, gold
    pastimes new and old
    the empty bottles roll on the floor
    the needles lay by the door
    intoxicated and then some more
    don't know if i'll recover this time
    i think i've crossed the line
    3 big bottles and a glass of wine
    not to mention my biggest slip
    the shards of metal against my wrist
    no-one but me really know why
    and i'm too far gone to say, as my mouth goes dry
    i'm not sure if i'll come back up
    drowning in my sorrows, the only release i find
    my eyes close and one last thing crosses my mind
    blood flows down as i think
    i shouldn't have had that last drink
     
  2. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Your last line tells you that you do not want death hun you want help you want the pain inside to stop hugs to you
     
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