The fighter

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by total eclipse, Sep 3, 2009.

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  1. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    A fighter i used to be
    no battle no war would ever get me
    the demons the people who dressed their best
    attacking the young and innocent
    they had no affect on me
    i was made of rock no one would see
    but now the fighter is not made of this stone
    now that she is all alone
    she has noone to fight the battles for
    she has always gotton up once she hit the floor
    not now she lies so still so dead
    she can't get the things out of her head
    funny how she could battle what was seen
    the people their comments their actions their schemes
    she could battle them all and fight and win
    but now she found one thing she cant battle
    they are these dreams
    she cannot fight what she can't see
    the flashbacks the pain what irony
    all these years she stayed so strong
    now even now she has found she doesn't belong
    someone has finally knocked her out
    she is down to her final count
    good for him for bringing her down
    hope he feels he is so dam strong now
    why can't she just get up and fight one last fight
    because the fighter died that night
    Locked out once more was more then she could bare
    She decided then to disappear.
  2. shades

    shades Staff Alumni

    Excellent, but unfortunately so very sad...thanks for continuing to fight for everyone at SF
  3. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Good character study. :goodjob:
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    excellent :hug:
  5. total eclipse

    total eclipse SF Friend Staff Alumni

    Oh god it still hurts so very much i wish you would have just fought just got rid of your pain and told him what you thought told them all what you thought but no you ran you always run what wrong with you god whats wrong with you There is so much hate inside i want to hurt them god i just don't know what to do to stopthis pain IGNORE this as it is just me being weak again i am okay.
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