The Fog

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by Lucie, Jan 13, 2007.

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  1. Lucie

    Lucie Well-Known Member

    A fog lies all around me

    The fog is thick
    I can't see far ahead of me

    The fog is heavy
    such a weight to bare

    The fog is cold
    I shiver but can't get warm

    The fog is dark
    there is little light that penetrates it

    The fog is blinding
    everything's a blur

    The fog is choking
    I find it hard to breath

    The fog has me in it's icy grip
    I struggle but can't escape

    The fog will take me
    the fog will win
    the fog will set me free..
     
  2. thedeafmusician

    thedeafmusician Staff Alumni

    ...but then as the fog fades away... you only see another prison...

    I like it though, thanks for sharing. :hug:

    TDM
     
  3. Lucie

    Lucie Well-Known Member

    Thx, glad u like :hug:
     
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