The Garden Fence

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by MrSpaceBound, Aug 30, 2011.

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  1. MrSpaceBound

    MrSpaceBound Well-Known Member

    The Garden Fence

    Static on this land.
    I feel fresh and new.
    I see people come and go.
    I am good to lean on for a while.
    I am something for people to talk over.
    I start to break.
    Insults bounce off me.
    Like kids kicking footballs .
    Things grow and change around me.
    But still i stand here.
    Broken and full of splinters.
    Here i am the garden fence
     
  2. pit

    pit Well-Known Member

    Simple and fresh. I like!

    :rolleyes:
     
  3. VALIS

    VALIS Well-Known Member

    I like it a lot too. It's very evocative, I can see the scene clearly at the beginning and the endl
     
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