The Haze *trigger warning*

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by nagisa, Dec 27, 2008.

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  1. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    Feelings of rejection flood my mind
    Never understanding why this is
    Your voice resounds in my head
    Replaying what you said that night

    Picking up the blade
    My mind running full force
    Taking what information it needs
    To make the first cut

    Again and again, it’s all a haze
    Slicing into an eternal dream
    Wishing you would just hold me
    Knowing that will never be


    -Courtney
     
  2. aki

    aki Well-Known Member

    very powerful :hug: I'm enjoying your poems very much.
     
  3. nagisa

    nagisa Chat & Forum Buddy Staff Alumni

    Thank you so much :hug:
     
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    Intense! I like it :)
     
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