the hopeless(may trigger) please comment

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by white, Aug 9, 2008.

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  1. white

    white Well-Known Member

    Suicide
    You tell me not to try,
    But you cant feel my hurt inside,
    It really makes me want to cry.
    Suicide
    What if I really die?
    Would anyone even cry?
    Suicide
    How would I feel if I die.
    Why do I want to try.
    Suicide
    What if I pull?
    Will there be life after this?
    Is there hope?
    Hope
    Is there hope?
    Where is the hope found?
    Hope
    Iv lost it all.
    No hope in sight
    Hope
    Is here
    Im fighting the fight
    Fight
    The battle is always in sight
    Iv learned there will never be a end in sight.
    Easy
    Easy and Easyer everyday.
    I now have the strength to face the day.
    -Austin White


    As always please comment
     
  2. BioHomocide

    BioHomocide Well-Known Member

    I'm not much for words... All I will say is that you shouldn't feel guilty for the way you are. Just try your best and be your best. There's no reason to push yourself too far.

    Just be happy. :hug:
     
  3. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Alumni SF Supporter

    I absolutely love it! While reading it I could feel the emotions that were put into it! :hug:
     
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