the hurting

Discussion in 'Poet's Corner' started by forlorn, Jan 15, 2009.

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  1. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    lost in depairation.
    its their infatution,
    for bringing down the nation,
    they lust for blood.
    They lust for blood, they want their fill,
    they reach inside, they lust to kill.
    Its premeditated murder
    but they dont see, aring thats so unfair,
    darkness has no mercy.
    Its not a rare thing, cant stop this hurting.

    Evil pieces the skin, it searches for your soul,
    but you wont let it in, no you dont let it in.
    I spear of hatred,
    a sword so cruel, they chant deaths song,
    they want your heart from you,
    they really think they are God,
    oh they lust for blood.
    The time is coming soon theyll be the ones
    to lose and we wont pray for there souls
    as we should,
    because they never saved a prayer for us.
  2. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    This is song Ive written and not a poem, didnt go bk over the chorus but you can probably spot it. Its actually about bull fighting in spain but has other meanings, hope you like it :unsure:
  3. Sa Palomera

    Sa Palomera Well-Known Member

    I like it JimJam :hug:
    You should record yourself singing it :yes: :tongue:
  4. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    I also like it :)

    Thanks for sharing Jim :hug:
  5. Epical Taylz

    Epical Taylz Well-Known Member

    that was amazing
    i could diffinatly see it as a song.
    what genre song were you hoping to make it?

    please reply
    i really love this
  6. forlorn

    forlorn Staff Alumni

    Well seems to start like a rap but I like rock :smile:
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