The Long Storm

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  1. Failure,
    flaws,
    and faults
    through famine of the spirit
    Too much of life to begrudge
    Having tried,
    yet always falling
    In desperation I’ve been calling
    But too many are there are to judge me
    instead of any savior sweet,
    naught but only enemies
    and I am my own worst,
    feeling only cursed
    Perhaps, or sure, it’s my perception,
    some brand of self-deception
    But I feel naked before all, as myself,
    even for all there was that I gave
    With so many reasons there seem to blame,
    wounded too many times to name,
    there’s so precious little of me left to save…


    FAL1​
     
  2. ari

    ari Staff Alumni


    The words we all desperetly try to grasp
    left rasping for breath
    as death tries to wipe the haunting memories away
    we flee with all and any to escape the desimation of our soul
    shattered, battered, picture of the skewed world do we see
    praying to the heavens to the hells to set us all free
    The broken light inside prevail, even though the dark shadow rolls in to decieve
    mercy is cried for the precious for that is what we are
    I am the blinking star that cries for blessing from afar
    the tears wash us away
    into the light into the dark? where does this angel hark?
    the angel we need, deserve, we have been decieved
    in this saving hope
    in the scope of humanity, left raw
    what will be seen, remembered, believed
    Mercy,
    humbled by the pain of your words
    for i feel them too
    I bid you adieu and sweet blessings for quiet peace in the throes of this
     
  3. theleastofthese

    theleastofthese SF Friend Staff Alumni

    (((FAL1)))

    Your words leave me without the words to describe them!:eek:hmy: I wish I could eliminate those feelings of desperation and loss, but since I can't, I can only tell you that I love you and am glad we're friends!!!:smile: :smile:

    love and hugs,

    least
     
  4. It's so hard (impossible) to share these feelings with others "on the outside" - those who think their kindly-meant, but all-too-easy answers should suffice, but will never understand the complications and overwhelming aspects of Depression... Sometimes I wonder who is the more 'isolated'... *sigh*

    {{FAL1}}
     
  5. Petal

    Petal SF dreamer Staff Member Safety & Support SF Supporter

    Wonderful :flowers:
     
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